Just in time for the new year, a few clarifications:
I guess what I meant there is that because you’re working so much on the bird image, “reaping” seems like you’re mixing in a quality that seems very out of place.Originally Posted by 0xDEADCAFE
My issue with it is simply that you answer the question “Are they for me?” in part 6, so revisiting it in 7 is confusing. I caught that the turning point was when Swaglord has his little oops with the choking; this was a much smaller issue than how you read it, I guess.Originally Posted by 0xDEADCAFE
Hope that helps.